What is it that we're dying to do
As we fall and get tangled together?
We're sending each other up
And over waves of emotion,
Which may drown us if we let them.
You've got secrets, but then,
So do I.
Now, I struggle with my past.
You struggle to understand.
We exchange keys
To the rooms in our hearts
Where our souls are laid bare.
We cling to one another,
Climbing higher and higher
Where all we've left to do is fall
3 comments:
You know, that's not bad at all. Maybe the images or the wording are not as clever as they could be. You might come back one day with a fresh way of expressing the same things.
As for what you're saying...well, I don't want to misinterperet the poem or any of its lines. Maybe you can tell me the meaning of it in an email or something.
Otherwise, I think what you're getting at is something that's important to think about, and worth writing about, too.
I'm still at the point where I don't rightly know what it's all about... it's about the intensity, which I know you can feel and understand. The room that it mentions is from that song. As for the last line, I don't yet know if it means the good or the bad kind of fall
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